good job nadine i think that your literary essay was amazing because you mentioned the name of the book and the author and you told me the lesson that you learned.
Nadine I think you did an amazing job. You had lots of very important detail including the names of the moms. You had lots of dialogue which helped support your claim. My recommendation is to explain what scuttlebutt means.
good job nadine i think that your literary essay was amazing because you mentioned the name of the book and the author and you told me the lesson that you learned.
ReplyDeleteNadine I think you did an amazing job.
ReplyDeleteYou had lots of very important detail including the names of the moms.
You had lots of dialogue which helped support your claim.
My recommendation is to explain what scuttlebutt means.
I love how you had a clear claim, not only a good claim but a claim that meant something to the world. And you also used a lot of detail♡😘💓💖❤️💕
ReplyDeleteGood job Doudine!I loved your claim.Keep it up.👍
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